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Posted by dracokitten on February 15, 2013 at 9:10 AM

Option C Pantoum of devotion . for themotional thurs feb 14,2013

 

Upon my knees I wait,

Loyal as the day we met.

Sitting here I wonder if you will show up on this date.

Into my body, heart and soul I have let,

Loyal as the day we met.

Forever faithful serving you best,

Into my body, heart and soul I have let,

Because devoted is this Master's Pet.

Forever faithful serving you best,

Sitting here I wonder if you will show up on this date.

Because devoted is this Master's Pet,

Upon my knees I wait.

 

 



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2 Comments

Reply Tammy Hendrix
10:44 AM on February 16, 2013 
Words of true surrender and trust. I love this. Good stuff.

I did A and am now working on C.
Reply MoonCookee
2:29 PM on February 15, 2013 
Ya k now I have a true soft spot for rigorous formats. I do find the lot that call for repeated lines to be the hardest to complete with life in pure poetry but they work great in lyrics. I say you have found the sweet spot here. It is loaded and beautiful. I identify with it and am tickled by it all at once. Brava Bellisimo! Poet bow.